How's My Driving

[aaron_agate]

Agate's an OC but that doesn't exempt me from con crit. Fuck, it makes it all the more necessary, really. Is my writing bothering you? Is there any kind of characterization or plotting that could stand some constructive criticism? Or is there anything that I'm doing well that you think would be cool to see more of?

This post is locked and anon is enabled. Please don't hesitate to drop a thought or two. I appreciate everything from everyone.